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“Listen, dad. I know you always wanted me to be this tornado guy that destroys things, but I don't want to be that.”
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Untitled
A Play by Carlos A.

Performance: May 18, 2001
Thornton High School, Daly City


Time: 2:30 pm, Summer
Place: By the ocean. There is sand, salty water, and big rocks. It's sunny about 90 degrees.
At Rise: Twister, the tornado, and Ripper, his father, are twisting around, facing each other.



Twister:

Dad, I brought you here because I had about enough of listening to you. I'm tired of it. So, I want to move on with my life.

Ripper:

What are you talking about, son?

Twister:

I'm talking about---I'm old enough to make my own decisions, on my own.

Ripper:

What decisions? You never tell me nothin'.

Twister:

'Cos you never listen to me.

Ripper:
Well, you wanna talk? Talk.
Twister:
Listen, dad. I know you always wanted me to be this tornado guy that destroys things, but I don't want to be that.
Ripper:

You told me this so many times and I already told you no.

Twister:

Why? See what I mean? I try talking to you and I say something and you already made my decision.

Ripper:
I'm doing the best thing for you, son.
Twister:

If you were doing the best thing for me and you love me, you'll let me be what I want to be.

Ripper:

But why do you want to be the sky? I mean, you told me, but what's the point of it? If I wanted you to be the sky that's what I would have told you to be.

Twister:

Why do I destroy things? What's the point of it? It makes me feel sad. I just wish I could be something calm like the sky. Just pour water like when it rains. I'll just wet people and it won't hurt me or them. And I'll rain to make things grow, like trees, plants, and it'll make me happy to watch them grow from above.

Ripper:

But why watch them grow if I would just destroy them?

Twister:

You'll just destroy them, even if you knew I grew them?

Ripper:

Yes. You're disobeying me, so I'm going to disobey you.

Twister:

You're a bad father.

Ripper:

How could you say that? I took care of you for 25 years. Now you're just throwing that in my face? I've never told you the reason why I want you to stay a tornado.

Twister:

What reason? See, you have a reason and you never told me. You know why you never told me? Because we never talk unless I want to talk to you.

Ripper:

'Cos I never thought you'd want to be something else.

Twister:

How could you think that? We all want to be something else. Probably you wanted to be something else but your father would only let you be a tornado.

Ripper:

That’s not true. I want the best for you and your kids. I don't want your kids to get hurt the way you and me get hurt when we suck things into our bodies. I made a promise to my father that you will be a tornado no matter what happens. We need to clear the earth, so you're kids won't get hurt when they spin around--so they could be free.

Twister:

But you don't even know if I'm going to have kids.

Ripper:

You never know. I said the same thing. If you do have kids at least there'll be clear space already.

Twister:

Look, I want to be the sky because I want to see how it is to be on my own.

Ripper:

You could be on your own if you stay a tornado.

Twister:

No, I can't be, 'cos you'll always be behind my back.

Ripper:

'Cos I'm just watching over you.

Twister:

I want to take care of myself I'm 25 years old. I think I could handle it.

Ripper:

I'm 36 and I wish my dad was still watching over me.

Twister:

See, you have a wish, the same way I have a wish. We can't do nothing about yours, but we can do something about mine.

The End.
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