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You’re not a little girl anymore.  You should stop playing jokes and start taking more responsibility.
- excerpt from The Abandoned Sister

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The Abandoned Sister
A Play by Jessenia Hernandez

Performance: May, 2003
Thornton High School, Daly City


Time:Sun’s almost rising
Place:Where both oceans meet in the middle.  You see the sand, trees, big rocks, sea gulls.  You can see fish,(they’re in schools), sharks, dolphins playing, and big whales looking for food.  The sun is trying to come out.
You hear little kids screaming and yelling, having fun chasing Ophelia’s waves.

At Rise: Ophelia and Millie meet. 
 

 



Ophelia:

So, how was your night?

Millie:

It was OK.

Ophelia: Oh, that’s good that you got a good night’s sleep.  You know what I was doing last night?
Millie:

No.

Ophelia:

Well, I was taking care of some sick fish.  I was feeling aggravated.  It was
weird because that never happened before.  Would you know anything about
that?

Millie: UMM...No, I wouldn’t know anything about that.  Why would you think I’d
know anything about that.
Ophelia: Stop lying Millie.  You know how much I hate it when you lie.
Millie:

What are you talking about?  You think I had something to do with it?

Ophelia: No, I know you did.  I saw you.  When you thought I wasn’t looking.  You
slipped me extra oil and garbage.  Why would you do something like that?  You know how much my fish mean to me. Without them I can’t be big and beautiful. (cries)
Millie: Oh well, I didn’t mean it. It was supposed to be a joke.  I just wanted to have fun.
Ophelia: Well, this time it went too far.  The fishes died.  If they keep dying I’ll disappear.  Don’t you care about me?  You’re not a little girl anymore.  You should stop playing jokes and start taking more responsibility.  Start cleaning up for yourself.
Millie: Come on Ophelia.  Quit taking it so serious.  I mean, you’re big, and a couple of fish won’t hurt you.  You need to get over it.  That’s what you need to do.
Ophelia: ( her waves get higher—she yells)  What?  How could you say that?  I can’t get over it and I won’t get over it.  This is not a joke.  This is for real.  Why can’t you understand?
Millie: It’s not like you’re gonna disappear or something like that.  God, you take it so serious.
Ophelia: That’s the thing Millie.  I could disappear.  Do you want me to leave you? ‘Cause if you do, then that’s what’ll happen.  You think you can survive by yourself?  It’s not easy.  It’s not fun and games.  Without me, you’ll disappear too.  Then we both won’t be together.
Millie: Yeah, right.  Even if that did happen it would take a long time, plus I’m the youngest.  You have to take care of me no matter what.  Maybe I don’t need you.  Who needs somebody telling them what to do all the time?  I never get to do what I want.  I want to play and have fun.
Ophelia: Well, when do you expect to clean up after yourself.
Millie: I’ll get to it someday.  I’ll do it.  Don’t worry about me.
Ophelia: But I do worry about you, Millie.  And me.  If you don’t clean up the mess and all you do is play, the garbage will pile up and be harder to clean up.  All the animals will die.  Not just the ones in us but the ones outside.  Why don’t you ask some of your fish to help you?  I can even send some of mine to help you.  Would you like that?
Millie:

Well, I’ll think about it but that still doesn’t mean I need you.
(monologue)
 
Man, if she helped me that’d be great.  Then I can be as big and beautiful as her and maybe even more.  I really don’t want her to disappear.  But if she does then I could take over her spot and I can have all the fish and stuff.  She’s had it long enough.  Maybe I’ll just use her and keep slipping more stuff on her side ‘till she gets smaller and smaller.  And she can’t do anything about it ‘cause I’m her little sister.  So, maybe I will act as if I need her. But I really don’t!  I’m just gonna make her think that.  Why does she get to be big and beautiful all of a sudden?  It’s not fair.  It’s my turn!
 
Yeah, I would like you to help. So, when do you begin?

Ophelia:

There’s more to it than that.  You gotta help too, and you have to listen to me no matter what.  And you gotta promise to not put garbage on my side.

Millie:

Sure, anything you say, Big Sis.

Scene 2
Time:
a week later, 10 A.M.
 
Place:
Where the oceans meet. We see lots of garbage, a lot of dead animals, people throwing bags of garbage. The sand’s not white.
 
At rise:
Millie is busy at work. Ophelia’s waves are very low.
Millie: What’s wrong?  You look different.
Ophelia: I don’t feel so good and I think I’m shrinking.  A lot of my fish have been dying.  This makes me feel depressed.  My waves are lower.  I’m not trying as hard.
Millie: What do you think caused it?
(aside)
Uh oh.  I think this is my fault.  How could I have done this to my own sister?  What kind of sister am I?  Should I tell her?  But then she’ll be mad.  But I’d rather her be mad than her leave me.  I’m not ready yet to be on my own.
Ophelia: I don’t know.  All of a sudden I had extra oil and garbage.  I don’t know where it came from.  I can’t believe this. I’ve been working like crazy and it seems to be for nothing.
Millie: I have to tell you something.  But before I do, I want you to know that I love you and I do need you.  I am the reason why you’re sick.  But before you say anything…I did it because I wanted to be like you.
Ophelia: (in shock – gets stiff)  Wow.  I can’t believe you.  You would actually do that to your own sister – out of jealousy.  You’re never gonna learn.  And you know what else?  I don’t think I want to be your sister any more.  I’m gone.  You can have everything.
(Ophelia disappears)
Millie: (crying) No Ophelia.  Come back. I didn’t mean it.  I’m sorry.  Come back.  Please……
   
    The End.
     
     
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